by QuestionableReality
This chapter was kind of fast paced and all over the place. I'm still trying to understand why Hua Lan hates werewolves. Its like she and Long Wei is holding an entire race to blame for the actions of something that happened in the past involving werewolves.
I'm still interested in the story! It's just that you suddenly gave us alot of information in such little time. It was too compact! For your next chapter you should try explaining some of the information here that held no background. It's all to sudden and honestly, quite confusing. Just don't waste too much time explaining but at least give some explanations. It's still good! And it doesn't HAVE to have sex in the story ( though it would be nice!!). Some stories here have no sex, just keep doing what your doing & you'll do fine
I really love this story. I bookmarked if and check regularly to see if you've updated. Please continue. This is a great story in the making. :D
Fantastic start, hope you plan on continuing this story. Check regularly to see and will continue to do so in hope.
So far im really enjoying this story. I'm dying to find out what happened to her in the past and to see where this is heading. Please update again soon.
Wow, really really amazing. please keep it I want to read more! :o
So well writen! This is too compelling a story to stop here. Please continue.