All Comments on 'The Merger'

Great opening to a series with a lot of taboo and kinky potential. Hope Part II is as good as part I!

...a very sexy scenario with huge potential and all the necessary components of a very erotic tale. Many more chapters to come, I hope.

This could lead to a great story when all is said and done!!!

I had a difficult time accepting that Sam Barclay, "the sixth in a long line of tough savy Barclay chairmen," would wilt so easily, and give up his only daughter to the new CEO to boot. Reality is that he would dump his company, with a multi-million dollar parachute package in place, and retire, or start another company....

FYI, I gave the The Merger Chapter 2, a Five rating because it was super-hot. I can't wait for Chapter 3. Make her dress up in some slutty outfits please!

I read this story awhile ago and absolutely loved it, and I've spent months trying to find it again! And now I did :) Amazing story!! Great job!