All Comments on 'The Merger'

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Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc6 months ago

I understand why, but the "CEO talk" became a distraction after a while. I would have liked a little more background, situational depth, on their relationship to get a better perspective. In some ways, you threw us into the middle of their courting. 4.2*

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy6 months ago

Good luck to them!

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Absolutely beautiful and tender and erotic… Loved it!

BlastusBlastus5 months ago

It was a good read. Something different.

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uabout 3 hours ago

WTF does she see in him, typical boorish CEO, hostile takeover indeed. Did not finish

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