All Comments on 'The Mermaid'

How about a similar story where the accused is turned into a centaur ? male to female or vice versa.

I see a lot of potential here

I never really know how centaur sex is supposed to work.

I fell more sorry for the girl than anything else. I think she should have bit his dick off and then drowned his ass. Now that would have been something I would have given any stars too but this gets 0.

Hope you continue with our mermaid

anon #1: I guess there should be a whole category for 'girl bites off man's dick', given how many anon comments I get begging for it - or are they all the same anon? Is it you? Seems like a rather unhealthy obsession to me...

anon #2: Hi! I'll certainly think about it...

You've planed some nice seeds in this story...the boss isn't always around, what if someone else dropped by at night. What happens if she gets pregnant....it'd be a shame not to do a follow-up or two.

Regardless, well done. One of your hotter stories.

Hot? It's tropical!

It's funny what people find hot. I would put this one under "Messed up but sorta sweet."

But thanks for commenting!

Any potential of a boner I had. Nothing hinted at this being a non-consent dark tragedy wtf. It's neither erotic nor very wholesome, in my opinion. Well written maybe but not something you read to feel good, emotionally or physically, unless you get off on other's misery I guess.

Goodnight

You poor thing...

Loved it!