All Comments on 'The Merrimans of Maine Ch. 01'

by Mainefiddleheads

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MattblackUKMattblackUKover 4 years ago
Starting out well

And I am eager to learn more about how this will all resolve itself.

5*, of course.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 4 years ago
Chapters

I hope this is continued soon, hopefully Leland will get his revenge. I'm surprised that with both Nina and Sylvia slutting it up, and both Gertie and Millie knowing about Sylvia that it hasn't busted wide open yet.

BTW, it's "orchard," not "orchid."

MainefiddleheadsMainefiddleheadsover 4 years agoAuthor
s brooks

Aw, the wonders of auto spell check

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionover 4 years ago
Yes, infidelity and sluts side by side with innocent young love

Makes interesting and dramatic contrasts in a pastoral setting as all the most dangerous of elements in place ready as conflict and war looms. The next chapter is greatly anticipated.

SRTigerSRTigerover 4 years ago
As usual a wonderful story

I read all your stories , I enjoyed all especially Loving wives category stories. You are one of my favorite authors.I Was waiting for your new story. Pl keep writing such masterpieces.

BigJohn601BigJohn601over 4 years ago
Gawd.......poor father and husband with a household of sluts.

A very enjoyable story well told with excellent visual depictions. Thanks.

patilliepatillieover 4 years ago
Cant wait for next chapt

Nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Please continue

Your writing is wicked good. Please continue.

Thanks

iameaseliameaselalmost 3 years ago

Would you please come back!!!!

I do enjoy your writing and you are in the upper echelon of writers here.

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