All Comments on 'The Meteorite Pt. 02'

I was genuinely concerned you were actually going to let her burst. Thanks for not doing that, I personally find it quite disconcerting

No worries! Yeah I understand. I like to use the ‘bursting’ dialogue as a tool for climax. If a character does pop in future, it will be really silly/cartoonish. E.g. she’ll just go back to a normal size suddenly :)

...but you need to learn the alphabet. F does NOT ccome after K.