by Nameless_Rose
...not that that's a bad thing. I'd like to learn more about George; is he the type of guy who wanders into strange places often? What's his past like? And of course he's made contact with a world ripe for exploration. Thankfully you've left plenty of room for a sequel.
Very unusual story and I really liked the originality of it. Really hope there is a 2nd part to this.
LOVE IT!!!! PLASE POST MORE! Id like to see what poor Guy got himslef into! xoxox
You have a real talent for bringing characters to life and painting a scene in vivid imagery. Please keep writing and consider branching out into material for publication - you have a real gift.
A most interesting beginning for a continuing story line. Thoughts coming to mind include her coming to him in his mind and striving to keep him alive during the period of his soul's servitude when any number of potential damning adventures befall him in service to the auctioneer. The evolution of a love between he and she would be nice to explore...