All Comments on 'The Midnight Auction'

by Nameless_Rose

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diggypopdiggypopover 13 years ago
Left me wanting more...

...not that that's a bad thing. I'd like to learn more about George; is he the type of guy who wanders into strange places often? What's his past like? And of course he's made contact with a world ripe for exploration. Thankfully you've left plenty of room for a sequel.

angelx602angelx602over 13 years ago
Loved it

Very unusual story and I really liked the originality of it. Really hope there is a 2nd part to this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

LOVE IT!!!! PLASE POST MORE! Id like to see what poor Guy got himslef into! xoxox

AliceChaneyAliceChaneyalmost 11 years ago
Amazing writing

You have a real talent for bringing characters to life and painting a scene in vivid imagery. Please keep writing and consider branching out into material for publication - you have a real gift.

Calli06Calli06almost 11 years ago
Loved it!

A most interesting beginning for a continuing story line. Thoughts coming to mind include her coming to him in his mind and striving to keep him alive during the period of his soul's servitude when any number of potential damning adventures befall him in service to the auctioneer. The evolution of a love between he and she would be nice to explore...

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