All Comments on 'The Milton Diaries Ch. 01'

GREAT JOB(; continue to write just the same and don't let other peoples comments dictate your writing.

the first part should have been at the end you just confuse the reader when you jump back like that you should have started with the part that was three months ago then went on i hope you finish this and do a better job no jumping around time wise

another usless asshole writer that can't finish what they start total waste of time. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND SOME RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND FINISH WHAT YOU STARTED OR REMOVE IT.

DBRS