by Juggling Fool
What an awesome story...loved the mirror. You out did yourself this time :)
That was sooo erotic and sensual, JF, loved every minute of it!!
Please write a second one with her watching him like she says she wants to at the end of the story.
JF!!...loved the story..it was very realistic...I could see that happening and when reading it..I did imagine it happening....yummmmmmmmm!!! ....and I agree....we NEED a part II with her wish coming true....I know you have it in ya JF....*grinning*
Now that was SO HOT. Not only erotic but romantic too. I am very impressed with the way this was done...I enjoy my mirror at times too. My favorite line was..."The light blue silk was delicate in her hands as she carefully pulled it over her head, feeling it caress her skin and whisper over her nipples." Whisper is such a nice word but to use it with nipple. Oh MY ! Now I want to see you do another story with just as much class with him in front. * applauds*
Juggs,
This story perfectly captures the excitement and continued lust that most married couples with they had...
Well written... great dialogue... good wit...
keep em coming!!
Foolie,
Awesome wordsmithing (as always)!!! Great foreplay and build-up as well.
The emotional journey of the couple was very well chronicled. Thank you for sharing the story with us!
*hugs*
LilyT
Well, Fool.......you've done it again.....so hot I had to get out Bob and Arnold before I could finish the story. Keep up the good work...and someday, I hope I can find a husband just like the one in the story. I've got plenty on my Honey Do list. We love ya darlin....xoxoxo
WOW...what can I say that the others haven't? Such a wonderful story. You make us all want to be that couple. You have certainly "inspired" me...<smiles> It's like I was right there....
Keep up the great writing. I will be waiting for the next one....
Fantabulous. I love mirror sex so you can imagine how much I enjoyed your story. I am looking forward to reading more! Call me if you need inspiration *grinz* I promise to shave my armpits!!! LOL *wink*
What a tremendously tender, erotic, exciting thing to watch.
I adored it. Very hot.. verging on kinky, but I love the level of eroticism in just their simple acts..leading up to their taboos. I would also love to see a sequel
Penny Lane / Fuck Me Gently with a Chainsaw
Very very very good. I enjoyed the setting, very realistic and I can see myself in that position (as Cindy of course) I look forward to reading part two...which is his turn I assume.
Clarissa.