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"Mom... please..." I said, my fists clenching in frustration.
No reaction, not even to acknowledge that I had said anything. A quick stab in my chest had me draw in a quick breath as she began walking towards the door.
"Please mom... don't just..." I tried again, cursing myself for almost letting my voice crack. "I love you."
That made her pause. Only for a second though. Then she continued, taking the last few steps to the door. The sound it made as it clicked shut after her was... deafening.
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- COMMENTS
waltdeealmost 2 years agoHoly fuck! Are you serious?! *That*'s how you're going to leave it?! You've had 6 years to at least add part 5 if not actually finish the story. It sounded like you have a clear end game that you were working toward, so why haven't you finished it? Did you die after June of 2016 or something?!
I'm sorry if I sound like I'm pissed off, but I'm pissed off. This is the equivalent of blowing a guy and then just getting up and walking out of his life when things were just starting to get good.
Frankie1952over 4 years agoSurely there is a conclusion to this wonderful story! Leaving your readers with a cliffhanger like this is cruel. Please finish the tale.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoFuck, it really just stopped there? God dammit, that's gonna bug me for ages.
Anonymousover 5 years agoThank you for taking the time to both write and publish this. This is without a doubt one of the most erotic series of stories that I have ever read on this site.
5 big stars!!
Anonymousover 7 years agoHello. I hope everythings ok. Would love to hear the end of the story. You're alnost at the finish line. I'm dying for an update. Really love this story!
AydanFioreover 7 years agoI just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this story so far. I love the characters, and I can't wait to find out what this great big "plan" of theirs eventually turns out to be.
However, I must admit, for whatever reason, I desperately want Sam and Claire to hook up, even though some people here in the comments have expressed distaste for Claire. I personally think she's misunderstood.
Also, I think it's obvious Ava had sex with Nicholas the night "the plan" was conceived. Deep down, I think Claire knows this, which explains why she's so observant of Nicholas when he's around Ava.
I think Ava had sex with Nick for two basic reasons... #1: "the plan" might result in Claire having sex with her father. If so, fucking Nick is her way of getting even before the damage is done. #2: Ava has a history of being used by men like Nick, so she lured him as a test to see what kind of man he truly is, and he took the bait...hook line and sinker. By knowing the truth about Nick, she is better able to protect her daughter by exposing him later on.
However, this puts Ava in a position of hurting both her children. If Ava exposes Nick by having sex with him again or by making him admit that he fucked her that night, yes, she would break up Nick and Clair, but it would also make Claire resent her mother, and I'm sure knowing that Ava screwed her own daughter's boyfriend behind Sam and Clair's back that night would surely drive a wedge between her and Sam.
Also, this would bring Sam and Claire together as victims of the same crime.
