The Mix Up

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"Get up! Get the fuck up off my floor!" she said. Michael quickly obeyed. "When I'm fucking finished with you, you're going to be the perfect man, the perfect husband, the most perfect fucking... cunt ever, understood?"

"Yes goddess," Michael said softly. Zoey stared at him, breathing hard. She was still uncomfortably aroused, but an orgasm seemed a long way off.

"Good, good. Fucking splendid," Zoey laughed, wiping sweat from her brow.

"Thankyou goddess."

Zoey sighed.

"I must say, I'm disappointed in you," she said. "You came in here so pent up and obedient. But seeing as you can't even do basic things like lick a fucking pussy, I'm going to spend the rest of the hour you booked whipping your ass, got it?"

"Yes goddess," Michael nodded. He seemed resigned to his fate.

"And when that's over you're going to go home to your wife and apologize profusely," Zoey continued. "I mean you're going to get on your fucking knees and tell her you're sorry, that you'll listen and communicate more."

"Yes goddess."

Zoey stood up.

"Now, playtime's over sweetheart. Follow me to the fun room."

She turned and started walking before suddenly stopping and turning back, as if in mid-thought.

"Oh, and by the way," she said. "I hope you can think of an excuse as why your ass is going to be covered in bruises..."

THE END

I hope you enjoyed my first foray into femdom! Let me know what you think, I'm always open to feedback and love reading the comments.

Clara xox

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jasonred79jasonred7910 months ago

Some part of me is wishing that she asks for intercourse and he says red, and uses what she taught him to become a good husband who communicates with his wife, and learns how to actually please a woman. And it ends with her bewildered at the unexpectedly successful result and considering a career change. 😂

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Pretty unbelievable, as all femdom stories are. A good alternative would be him turning the tables on her, totally dominating her physically, and making her realize she was never really a dominatrix at all, but a closeted submissive with daddy issues. As is, bleh.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Wonderful story - thanks

AgielAgiel12 months ago

** A DIFFERENT APPROACH to a bdsm story and reasonably well written plus (in this fantasy world of erotic writing we all share) quite logical. 👏

** BUT THERE HAS to be some degree of realism. His friend Tom, also in middle management, can afford to give her $3000 a week for an hours session? 🤔 Let me know where the firm is and I’ll apply for a job there. 😂

** THERE’S A PORNSTAR by the name of Ava Koxx who fits the bill as an Amazonian Dominatrix and for Zoey to be 6’4” with a great body isn’t unusual.

oliver57oliver5712 months ago

Well done! I hope hear more about their time in the fun room—and when he gets home!

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