All Comments on 'The Mobster's Whore'

Honest and sexy with an edge to it. Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

Very good start. There has to be more. Five Stars.

Excellent beginning! I am excited to read the next chapter...5 STARS!!

Your writing is pretty good. My only bone to pick is that you have too much space. You hit that 'enter' button a little too often when you were writing.

You follow the rules of writing pretty well, though. Kudos

Cant wait to read the rest of this series!! Love the thoughts of both characters. I actually prefer the spaces you have in your writing, I think it makes it easier to read, but to each their own.