All Comments on 'The Monster in the Maze'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Where many would've simply made this a story of a monster ravaging a women in a terrifying and brutal rage, you've made something sensual and deeply erotic, for me. Helen's arousal and participation makes it that much better, and even sweet. Who knew a Minotaur could be so fun!

gayfroggayfrogover 1 year ago

love that you've kept the best parts of beastliness without falling back on cliches of brutality and domination. hell yeah for enthusiastic consent in monster fucking

Diamondknight87Diamondknight87over 1 year ago

Like the other commenters here, I greatly appreciate that she ended up being an active and eager participant *before* the real action started.

The writing itself was great, and while I don't expect a sequel, it would be most welcome!

ThrillherbrysonThrillherbrysonabout 1 year ago
Sequel

When is the next chapter?

ThrillherbrysonThrillherbrysonabout 1 year ago
Sequel

When is the next chapter?

thisismarciethisismarcie10 months ago

I adore this piece!!

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