All Comments on 'The Monster Pt. 18'

.....Damn only one page after making us wait so long

Don’t know if this is the start of Jack’s life experiences or more teasing on your part? Hope it’s the former.

The same bullshit as chapter 1 to 17. No action all talk

just wondered how long it would take for Naomi to get a piece of Jack. The idea of a harem with studley Jack in the center sounds like a great idea.

Thank You, Please Continue!!! With Great Talent comes some responsibility to "Fans"

18 chapters of edging. Frankly I think the whole series is a practical joke. Regardless I have s an utter waste.

1 star

Stretched out tiresome story. Though I am amused with the opening character profile list that describes each character though often none are in that "chapter" it is unnecessary padding to a ponderous story.

Same bullshit as chapter 1 to 17. Still no fucking and I think that it sucks

short but it is moving along.

Too much narrative with little movement of the story. 4*

I love the story. I don't care what others say, I love the fantasy behind it

I cannot recall a series where there was such as disparity between the overwhelmingly negative comments and the rather high rating. What, almost all of the people giving it 4 or 5 aren't commenting?

dragging it out too much

Get the poor boy laid. Like it

Great continuation although a bit short. And I can't wait till the next chapter. 5stars

Is this series a prank or something

People commenting about the story not moving forward, i agree. Probably if you start rating these stories 1 star might get the author's attention.

omg ive waited so long and am now waiting even longer...this is great but a little too much suspense ... thank you for the great story

you should stop now, this just drags on and on and on.

It's a good sign when the only complaints I have is that you need to proof read and edit more. That rose didn't seem like she was sorry when she apologized and that it was too short for the wait.

But the make out scenes were hot and I'm looking forward to his date with the teacher...even though I feel like he won't have sex with her yet since that's likely going to jo or Sara...but probably jo.

Keep up the great work and ignore the people who say nothings happening, while wilfully ignoring how he wakes up doing everything BUT fuck his mom

He can't get 1 star. This story is crap

Really hope the author dies a slow painful death in the near future

This series is not ment to give jack any kind of real sex. Not with his mom ore his sister ore his aunt ore with any other women it is just a stupid story with no other purpose than to be a lot of teasing. Break his hands but dont give him a quick death

Don't worry author tease us as much as you want.

Charlie, I have hung in there for 17 painful chapters, is this a fetish you have for portraying an 18 year old as a 12 year old ? You are a great writer but this story is just dragging and pisses off the readers.

Jack has got to be the most idiotic thickest moron I've ever had the misfortune of reading about.