All Comments on 'The Monster Pt. 22'

Can't wait until the mom is pregnant !

Another great installment to this wonderful story. I liked it very much. 5* from me.

Waaaaaaaaay tooooo short! Consider having each chapter take up at LEAST a full day! This entire series, as enjoyable as it is, should so far only have about 6-8 chapters. You would probably get 5* ratings across the board much easier if your chapters were more complete. I know that this is not the first time that you have heard about your tale being told in parts too short. Think about it, when you hear the same thing from different sources, then there is usually something to it. I really like the story line, but I wish that I could read a bit more at a time. I keep hoping!

Loving your stories, keep them coming! This one could have been a bit longer but then again we are ion installment 22. Great job

I'm still loving this series. I anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Hopefully not too long of a wait. 5stars

I like this story alot. I can't wait to see what will happen in chapter 23

AMAZING and delicious thank you for another quick read

Much better now that the kid is getting that pussy. Keep it up. When he fucks Naomi it should really blow his mind.

Now that he had sex and it looks like u won't simply stop in order to charge us to read the rest. I look forward to reading the comments from people trying to complain on how your story is awful

Can't wait for chapter 23

It was a well written story. He a lil nieve and

We read a story of all where all charters are so well endowed from chest to cock. Be tata as it may. The story good needs a lil more detail in the sex area plenty of room for more to be written in this series. The big chests and harem and him figuring out what to do with all that meat stix. Got to read more of your work but good so far just some things I look far could develop it into a sex club of big tits and hung men in a closed group where all enjoy the group. Good luck waiting for more.

reep what I feel I've sewn

really needs editing Using a basic word editor would catch these

The story is getting more interesting. It still needs editing.

A little too long and could use illistrations.