The Moray Eel: Final Transformation

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Madeline reaches her goal.
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Part 10 of the 10 part series

Updated 04/03/2024
Created 01/20/2024
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When Madeline arrived at Pandemonium there was a nervous smile on her face. She was here to meet her destiny and to be who she was totally. As usual it was Pamela who welcomed her. She immediately showed her her bedroom. It was small but comfortable and pleasant.

- After a day of hard work you will be in need for a nice place where to rest.

It was the day after her arrival that the serious things started. Madeline was lead by Pamela to a room looking a bit like a cross between a bathroom and a surgery room. All was white and there was a smell reminding the one of a hospital. Two women were waiting for her, they were wearing outfit that looked like a mix between an hasmat suit and a fetishist latex one. Doctoresse M was here too. She showed to Maddie a metallic chair.

- Take your outfit off and sit Madeline. Moray eels have no hair so it's time to get ride of yours.

She sat and one of the women started to cut her hair short while the other was shaving her sex and legs. They worked fast and soon Madi was totally bald.

- Now we will make sure your hair won't regrow too fast.

The women put googles that looked like swimming ones on Madi face. Her ears were protected with special ear plugs and then she was given a mask that was covering her nose and mouth and was connected to a small oxygen bottle.

One of the women took her hand and made her enter a shower cabin. The first stream that came from the shower was a strange blue liquid smelling like a detergent, it was cold and she could feel it irritating her skin. The blue liquid was follow by cold water with so much pressure that it was almost painful.

When Madi was taken out of the shower she was trembling due the coldness. She was lead in front off a big mirror. There she could see herself, she was totally bald. It was accentuating the weirdness of her pierced dancer like body with the empty sagging breasts and the stretched intimate lips.

- Take some rest. Tomorrow you will be put at work. You will be tested one month. If you succeed we will go to the next level. And by succeeding, I mean if you don't end begging to leave.

The day that followed Pamela woke up Madeline early. After a good breakfast she took her to a narrow hallway where one of the wall was pierced with holes. Some were wide, closed with rubber and there was a table of sort fixed on the wall.

- It's simple. I bet you guess what the small holes are for. The biggest ones, we call it the Czech one, you go on the other side, you go through the curtain and you rest your upper body on the table. So that the client can fuck your ass and pussy without you even seeing him. Don't worry there are cameras and no one is allowed to fuck without condom. Do you see those 3 light here? The green one is for classical glory hole work, the orange for the Czech one and the red means you can rest a bit. This will be your work today. There you have towels, something to drink and eat, condoms an lubricant. The toilets are behind that door. Understood?

Madeline knew she was in a brothel and that she was to work as a prostitute but it wasn't what she expected at all. She was surprised, a bit frightened and excited. But her decision was made.

- Understood, I'll do it.

Pamela smiled and left her.

To Madi's surprise despite the early hour the green light was soon switched on. She knelt near the hole and soon a hard penis with a condom appeared through it. She immediately starts to stroke and suck it. Some few second after starting she could not resist to play with her womanhood with her free hand. It was only the first, 5 other clients followed for the same work.

After the fifth the orange light was switched on. As she was told Madi went on the other side of the wall and went through the curtain, head first. Less than a minute after she was in she heard walk noises. Some seconds later she could feel hands on her ass, caressing it.

What followed what the cold feeling of lubricant poured on her asshole and then the one of a hard sex entering it. When the man pushed his sex in her she moaned of delight. Madi spend the whole day serving client, all her holes were put at use. At the beginning she was counting clients but in the middle of the afternoon she lost the count after the 10th. When the day was over she was tired but satisfied.

- I can't believe I enjoyed that. I can't... Stop lying to yourself Madi, there is no surprise at all. You have been a filthy slut for so many months. What you did today is just another step.

She ate, had a shower and went to bed.

Everyday of the whole month was the same. Everyday she worked at the glory hole serving countless men. She felt like being a blue collar working on a production line, in her case it was taking a cock after another like she was a machine.

Sometimes she was very excited and took pleasure and sometimes she felt dissociated from her body. Outside her work she did not see a lot of people. Her meals were taken in her room and she was too tired to do anything else than her work.

Pamela came to see her once or twice in a week to see if she was well and willing to continue, her answer was always the same.

- I'm ok. I don't want to stop.

At the end of the month Madeline met Doctoresse M again.

- It's time for you to take another step Madeline, if you are ready and don't wish to stop now.

- I'm ready.

- I will work on your teeth. Moray eels have predator teeth. This what you need.

Some few days later Madeline was on a dentist chair. After a local anesthesia M started to work on her teeth. Despite the anesthesia it was not something pleasant. Madi's mouth was kept open by a metallic device that looked like it was coming from a torture chamber and she could feel the work done on her. It was so uncomfortable that it seemed that the whole thing took ages.

When the whole operation was done she was very tired, but it was when the anesthesia worn off that she felt really bad. She felt like she had fought against a heavy weight boxer. Her jaws and lower face were hurting like hell. When she saw herself in a mirror she indeed looked like she had been beaten by a professional fighter. Her face was blue and soon it started to inflate so much that she looked like a hamster.

During 2 weeks she had to eat liquid and smashed food. After those 2 weeks her face was back to normal and she could look at her teeth. Almost all of them were now pointy like predators ones. Her smile was no longer the one of a beauty but the one of a carnivorous creature. When M examined the result of her work she was satisfied.

- Good. In the months to come, we will work to make you look like the creature you really are. You will have a daily routine too.

As usual it was Pamela who told her about her new routine.

- From 8 to 10 am training, 10 to 12 we will see how you can help to manage Pandemonium financial assets. In the afternoon: from 13h30 to 15 financial management too, 15 to 16 rest, and then work at the glory hole until 19. If needed you will work again there from 21 to 22. From now you will have your meals with the others. A last thing, your name is now The Moray Eel, not whatever your identity was before today. Understood?

- Yes.

The Moray Eel could not hide her surprise when she met her trainer for the first time. She was a dancer without any doubt, her body was the perfect dancer's one. But her face... In fact she had no face. There were eyes, ears, a mouth and a nose but it was like every other features of her face had been erased making of it a smooth mask of skin barely showing any expression. The fact she was bald as The Moray Eel accentuated that absence of facial features

The training was the same than the one she did at home the last months but at a very higher level. It was like she had to torture her body to relearn to walk, to walk like an animal as she was no longer human. Her teacher didn't spoke a lot but the few times she did it was in a perfect french.

Financial management was easy for her, in a matter of days she totally outclassed the Pandemonium usual adviser. But for the first time, instead of killing professionally the accountant, she cooperated with him.

It took her time to get used to eating with the other people working at Pandemonium. Most were what common people would called freaks with looks that were as weird as the dancer. There bodies were strange but for some their way to move too. At first it was hard for her to not peep at the weirdest ones.

The language was, a at first, making things difficult too. The Pandemonium was a Babel tower of a sort. Many languages were spoken there. English was often spoken as the common language but not everybody had a level that allowed to have a real talk. Despite all The Moray Eel felt at home there after some weeks. All those freaks were for most gentle people.

At the beginning of the following month she met M again.

- Moray eel need gills aren't they?

- Of course.

The following week M worked by using tattoos and scarifications to modified her neck look in order to give the illusion she had gills on it. It was less painful than the intervention on her teeth but it was not really pleasant.

At the end of the month the result was already stunning even if M told The Moray Eel that the healing process was not totally finished. That did not prevent M to plan another intervention. When The Moray Eel met her she was sitting in front of a computer.

- Sit next to me.

On the computer a graphic software was showing, 2 different windows, Madeline Dumay's body and face when she met the doctor for the first time. At that time Madi was an obese woman, with grey hair, an ugly hair cut and skin dried by smoking.

- This is what you were.

M hit a button and the software showed the evolution from the obese woman to the fitness model look, from the fitness model to the dancer look with the sagging breasts. The animation stopped to The Moray Eel present look.

- Your face is not yet perfect. This is what I intend to do to make it look what you really are.

M hit the button again and the face changed. The Moray Eel stared at the screen completely mesmerized by what she saw.

- This is the final step, if you are ready.

- I am, more than ever.

- Good, we have some few tests to do before, like blood tests. If all is good I will perform the surgery next week.

When the day came, the last thing The Moray Eel did was to look at her face in a mirror.

- Say your prayer Madeline Dumay, this last step will definitively kill you so that The Moray Eel lives as she should live.

It was with a smiles revealing her predator teeth that she fell asleep after the anesthetic injection.

Waking up was less pleasant, she was like stoned due the anesthesia and her face was totally wrapped in medical dressing. As after the teeth intervention the pain came later. The last time she felt like coming from a boxing competition, but this time she felt more like she had been attacked by a psychopath armed with a knife.

The medication made it bearable but was maintained to a minimum so it did not kill the pain totally. That time too her food was made up of liquid and smashed food. Her dressing was changed on a regular basis but she was given a mirror only weeks after the surgery.

She was rather confident since M looked very pleased by the result every time she examined her. What she saw in the mirror had no longer anything to do with Madeline Dumay, it was the face of a carnivorous, angry and ferocious creature. The way she was permanently frowning, the look of her mouth revealing pointy teeth and the permanent grin on her face, everything was expressing ferocity.

- Finally I am outside what I have always been inside. I am The Moray Eel.

Months or years later, Claude Meyrand entered The Pandemonium. Claude was an handsome, intelligent and wealthy man in his late twenties. Claude could have almost any woman he wanted, but Claude had sexual tastes that were special according to common standards.

What excited Claude was not top models but freaks, the weirder the uglier, the dirtier the better. After some dangerous encounters and after having heard about the Pandemonium, he decided to visit the German brothel that was known for its freaks. It was expensive so he hoped he wouldn't be disappointed.

The bedroom was pretty luxurious with a huge round bed, several big aquariums and a water falling down a wall making like a curtain of water. He heard the door opened thinking.

- There she is.

A woman entered the room walking in a strange way. She was moving like a snake would move if it had legs. She came to him making semi circles and undulating her body. She was of average height, her body had the flexible musculature of a dancer. The only thing she was wearing was an under bust corset on which were falling her saggy and empty breasts. As her intimate lips her nipples were pierced by rings. She was totally bald. That baldness allowed to better see her face that was like the one of an animal. She had the grin of an angry and hungry beast.

When she was close to Vincent she hissed like a snake as her hands were running on him taking his clothes off. It was just after taking his sex out and just before kneeling that she opened her mouth wide revealing the teeth of a flesh eating predator.

At that moment Vincent knew that he had not wasted his money by coming to Pandemonium and hiring that freak named The Moray Eel.

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I hope you plan something like this.

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