by Larysa
So wonderfully written, thank you and welcome to Lit! I would love to read more from you.
... it IS a marvellous day for new talent! And this story was by no means the least of the excellent new material we have seen here today; thank you, welcome and please have five stars with my compliments.
Story had me from the start. Made me feel like I was right there. Can't wait for the next chapter.
You did a very good job in making your reader feel as if they were your Master. I look forward to reading many more enticing story's from you.