All Comments on 'The Motorcycle Ride'

A real sex toy!

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Love when monogamous couple having fun.

TT: At least, read your first draft before posting it! And read the LIT definition of LW before picking it as the LIT category within which to place your offering. The term ‘adventurous wife’ generally, within LIT, means she is having extramarital sex. But that is not absolute. If this Sweetie had chosen a place where the public could see and hear their efforts, that would count … but she only has sex with her hubby outdoors, believing it will be private!

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My wife loves the new accessory I bought for my RoadKing. It’s called a VibeRider. It’s a vibrator that gets installed under the passenger seat leather. It’s tied into the bikes engine so the more you rev, the more it vibrates. She absolutely loves it. It gives her several orgasms as we ride. Last week she told her friend Kayla to hop on the back and let me give her a ride. It was so funny hearing her OOOH and AAAH and shift around behind me. We had a long hill and I layer into it. She came just as we got to the top. My wife was laughing and kidding her when we got back and finally told her about the vibrator.

Not bad, but the wife should have been on the back of the friend’s bike.

Nice tale.........proof the draft before posting............

Not bad.

And Lickideesplit would rather you write a clearly homosexual man as the husband and if you do that, he wont wet his husbands panties like he does.

Bi/Gay wet diapered category guards really need to just go quietly back into that closet.

Good on Tom for handling his business ithout needing any help.

"rainShe starts to breath heavy" You can't have proofread this. If you don't care about your work, then why should your readers?

Sorry stopped reading because the writing is so poor, please get someone to edit your efforts. Nothing wrong with what you are writing about i.e. sex but poor grammar and sentence construction is a put off.

What Mac_Lapu said, dittos...

Fucked many of times on the colonial parkway, even where I believe this took place