All Comments on 'The Mountain Girl Ch. 03'

by Shaima32

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Cindy1001Cindy1001almost 7 years ago
Thank you

for taking us along in this wonderful journey of discovery. You have built some interesting and awesome characters. Fantastic read!

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 7 years ago
very good

I am following this series and so far it has been very good, I really like the build-up no just jumping into bed after the first half page of the 1st ch. hope to read more soon

LinneaLundinLinneaLundinalmost 7 years ago
Lovely

I love the slow build, along with the character development. I'm invested in both Heidi and Zoe, it'll be fun to watch their love story continue to unfold. Thank you for taking us on the ride.

moyaroomoyarooalmost 7 years ago
As much as I have loved in the past

I am loving more in the present the sweet way you bring out the best in your characters. 6 on a scale of 5

fishingrod48fishingrod48almost 7 years ago
Great Writing

Loved the way you built this up keep it going

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenalmost 7 years ago
Still loving it!

And really looking forward to chapter 4 and beyond! Thank you for sharing this with us!

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4ualmost 7 years ago

I am loving this story. The pace is good, the character development is good. It's just good all the way around. Great job Shaima

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Reading your stories are good for the soul

You are a gem. Your goodness shines out through your characters, it is such a pleasure to read your work. PS thanks for avoiding the Victorian obsession with AFL, you capture the essence of Aussie culture without exposing the reader to this silly game. Signed Proud Aussie fan(of your work)

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