by MsNotSleeping
That was a way more serious story than I usually expect to read on Literotica :)
It had a backstory, proper pacing, the suspense, all the necessary details to make it a lot more than just a source of arousal. I should be disappointed because I come to this site to be horny, but I'm not :)
A great story!
Thanks for your kind words Matt, I'm glad you enjoyed it even if it wasn't what you expected. What would you like to see in a sequel? (I have my own ideas, but I'm always open to new ones!)
That is such good writing! A far higher level than 99.9% of the stories on here, it had me totally immersed- and very disappointed you didn't keep it going. I hope you have continued writing in some form since, you have genuine talent.