by MsNotSleeping
That is such good writing! A far higher level than 99.9% of the stories on here, it had me totally immersed- and very disappointed you didn't keep it going. I hope you have continued writing in some form since, you have genuine talent.
Thanks for your kind words Matt, I'm glad you enjoyed it even if it wasn't what you expected. What would you like to see in a sequel? (I have my own ideas, but I'm always open to new ones!)
That was a way more serious story than I usually expect to read on Literotica :)
It had a backstory, proper pacing, the suspense, all the necessary details to make it a lot more than just a source of arousal. I should be disappointed because I come to this site to be horny, but I'm not :)
A great story!