All Comments on 'The Music Of My Life'

AWFUL. Kennedy is clearly a nutcase and True sociopath and the main character is incredibly weak. I cannot stand these kinds of stupid convoluted loving wife stories were the husband or boyfriend boyfriend goes on and on and on about how outrageous and completely unacceptable the wife's action has been and now hes not going to put up with it......

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And then 2 months later she's moved back in and they are screwing

The story is kind Of a enjoyable read but quite frankly quite frankly I was so disgusted after tge first 3 pages with the main character I almost stop reading.

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She intentiona gores out of her way to screw him over in high school.

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She sets them up so he goes to jail. Not just breaks up with him but actually has him going to jail for a crime he did not commit.

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Gives away his children without his knowledge for a illegal adoption.

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So of course he naturally takes her back and marries her

Very good story, H!

Oh, that was one hell of a ride. Love found, love lost, redemption, love lost again. And two different, but equally important loves found again. 5* read all the way through.

Now this is a fun tale. Thank you.

Loved it.

I hated that he got stomped by Kennedy so often. It's hard when you love someone that much who clearly either doesn't or doesn't know how to love you back. Still, I believe this to be one of your better stories. Loved the LTW reference with Plato's Place. Nicely done.

Love this one - you done good, Hooked.

What happened to Father Ron?

Loved the story, although I am ambivalent about K. A good read as always. Thanks.

By the first few paragraphs I could tell this was going to be Fag Cuck Shit. So I just skipped to the last two pages, which was one page too few to skip, and got what was the essence of the plot. Glad everyone else thinks this wimp's bio is epic. My real sympathy goes out to Chelsea, what defective genes. I'm not sure what this was supposed to be, but thanks for the effort.

Yes, I really liked it. Not at first, but it grew on me quickly. Then the final couple of pages cemented the final rating.

Great story, great ending.

WONDERFUL STORY! Just like always! Too bad Kennedy had her head up her ass so much

The guy was pathetic for my taste but atleast he was one lucky basted and got him self a Loving Wife in the end.

As others have mentioned, you didn't connect the intro to the main story. While I thought the main body of the story was well done, this omission left too many things hanging. Who was he really mourning, since the second part of the story doesn't mention his bender after Kennedy's death at all. I can only assume that this is part of a series and this will be rectified in another chapter.

When someone shows you who they are, believe them. She did when they were in high school.

Nope!! Two years they dated and she didn’t give up the Punani. Bet she gave it up at prom though. “It’s just one date”. Skank Whore!!!

Loved it.....great job.

Great story that really shows your range and ability as a writer. Kennedy deserved burning as much as any Traci you ever wrote about, but you avoided the easy , expected, route and wrote this story. I really think this is one of your best efforts yet. A pleasure to read.

Great story. Loved it. The characters were wonderful.

Great story well told.

5 stars

Cagivagurl

5 stars to writer. Didn't give. Me wood but kept my attention long enough to read whole thing. Slut wife just like Jenny in the hump movie. How he could have anything to do with her after she set him up for prison is beyond me. Jimmy should have had an accident o. The road. This was like a reasers digest story of life. Good story. No boner tho! LOL

Beautiful story. I would hope for a chapter 2. Seeing as Bobby's love life was crap before he met his daughter and Donna. Some people are just so good and kind that they end up with 34 years of crap being with the cheater coke whore. He and we deserve a second verse so to speak. BTRH...

Wow... outstanding. Touched me deeply, and it left me a little bit out of kilter, too. Great writing does that. 5+++++/5!

Beautiful story with a happy fairytale ending.

This story was far from the standard loving wives tale, yet it was a pleasure to read, in part, because of that. Hooked, you hooked another reader. A great story all the way around.

Usually enjoy your stuff. This didn't do it for me. The whole prison term really didn't sit well with me. I'd never speak to her again regardless of how I used to feel or how far she'd fallen. Also, he's now rich and famous and can't get better payback on the bastard that set him up than eating him blackballed? At the very least, arrange to have his hand broken like he promised years earlier. Sorry, this was a fail.

A varied, well-told story. Just how life goes. Some men are just more than blind from sheer "love"! 5*!

Dumb ass cuck

But what about the priest at the start of the story?

Yet another HDK cuck story. 1 star for this tripe or your normal story line !

Excellent read, lucky dude.

Still waiting for the climax.

Beautiful story, even if Kennedy was garbage.

Intro needs a major re-write. Kept it from being 5 stars.

Excellent story.

Great story.

What? No Traci? Just kidding. OK, so without Traci, one could say that this wasn't a typical H57 story. But since it's a 5, it's all too typical. Really excellent, smoothly sequencing through a LW theme (though Kennedy never actually became his wife) into a lovely Romance. Of course, like most LW stories about a professional musician, the #1 hits come a bit too easy to be at all realistic. FYI, rock-band #1 singles happened in the 20th century, not the 21st. Just saying. The other quibble is that Bobby's 30 days of alcoholism seems to have been forgotten by the time Kennedy is dead on page 4. Music was his salvation, he says, but in fact that Reverend Ron should have been noted here as the link that got him back to the music. Consistency, y'know. Now, I kinda saw the thing with Donna coming, and thought it would be real nice if it did. And it did. Thanks, Hooked. Stev2244 is another of our best active writers, so his endorsement of this story counts for a lot. As to those who lamented the lack of revenge on Jimmy, look - Bobby shanked his music career. Leaving him a coke-addicted waiter. Doubt he lasted much longer than Kennedy did. And the best revenge is living well. Bobby did so, in spades, and that's even before he found Chelsea and Donna. Not sure I buy the Forrest Gump analogy that one of the Anons posited, but it was an intriguing thought. Also don't agree with those commentators who attacked the lead character (Bobby) as a wimp, etc. He played the long game, and came up roses. Some chump.

QuickMagazine

I am assuming there is a part 2 and that the beginning grave is one of his two girls (wife or bio daughter).

Beautiful story. Thank you! 5 BIG FAT BLAZING STARS!

Very nice and heartwarming story but wtf happened to Father Ron?

Your best. Brilliant on so many levels. Not littered with cliches and formulaic nonsense. Out there, but authentic.

You went full cuck .yet again , never fo full cuck

Oh joy!! Randi is organizing another cuckfest/wimpy males event with her little clique of writers. Why aren't these events open to all writers???

I don't have an empirical evidence to support my theory but after reading this story and several other highly rated story by many authors it appears that many readers prefer a well written story with a decent plot and story that can pass an eighth grade English review. This story passes the teacher test and would score will with most readers unless all they want is raunchy sex scenes and extreme BTB ending. When the reader can relate to the characters and feel that the story is complete what more needs to be said but "Well Done".

Where is Traci???

ok fair im only half way through but where the hell are kennedy's parents?

Couple of unusual errors (for you)…what happened to the priest and it's "Sara smile" no h.

Apart from that a cracking story, thank you.

When Ken helped Jimmy set Bobby up to go to jail, that should have been the end Bobby's love story with Ken. Only a self-centered psychopath acts that way towards someone who loves her and wants the best for her. If she didn't want him any longer, she could well leave him or just break up with him, but taking part in a conspiracy to send him to jail for cocaine possession because he's trying to prevent her from becoming a cocaine addict? Totally out of this world. That's the end of Ken and Bobby... FOREVER! Unless this is a story written for the Hallmark Channel... Thanks for the story.

One of your best, which is saying a lot. 5*.

I like that he never gave in and accepted her disrespect, love her from afar cuz that Kennedy was trash

A very good read, thank you for sharing this with us as water,

Too much jumping around and you have failed to resolve a lot of the different

storylines.

Very different Hooked story. The ending was shockingly abrupt, and did not connect in any way to the beginning of the story. WTF? Three stars ⭐️ for this one.

Good story. What was the resolution with the priest? Feeling like I missed something.

Did something I never did in the past on your stories. I skimmed through it and I'm glad I did. Sadly the men MC's in your stories of late have become nothing but sniveling little wimps.

Throughly enjoyed it. *****

Maybe Randi can organize another event with her little gang called Let's Do A Hit Piece On HarryinVA. You know kind of like Caviagurl did.

Why. The. Fuck. Does. He. Get. Back. Together. With. A. Slut. Who. Helped. Send. Him. To. Jail? Jesus, you have gone totally cucky these days.

This is a masterpiece. Original telling of the musician's story. Real characters, real behavior, real feeling.

Wow❗️

A very well written, entertaining story.

It is so disappointing 😞. The main character, Bobby, is stupid, repeats the same terrible decision over and over. Completely disconnected from reality and the reader....

Ouch, not your best work, by a very long shot.

This is the third story this past year with the music industry theme. By far the worst.

Can't rate this mess of a plot.

I'm not

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AMerryman

Good story of love and forgiveness and a new life

Methinks you forgot how your story began.

Yuck I just wasted a half an hour of my life reading this crap.

I guess I can relate to being taken advantage of by bitches and hoes.

I did time once because of one that also is dead now.

Probably why I am disgusted at myself to continue after the first couple of pages and reading it to the completion.

Yeah some bitches can be very evil! Glad I have a nice loving wife now. But bitches and hoes certainly are alot of fun when you are caught up in the moment,!

Warm and fuzzy sure; but like GladstonGliese said forgot the start of the story connection!!

But really there was no married "Loving Wives" in this one the closest was a gonna ask until Donna. Oh well dem's the breaks.

Still nice little yarn quite enjoyable beats guns n built proof he-men.

@Anonymous Re: Randi's Events - There are plenty of open events, also, you can always simply read non-event stories, GASP! organize your own event!

I don't see how people are calling this cuck. Yes, he foolishly hooked back up with her after prison, but they never got remarried, she DIED and he got a better woman.

Loved the story, but Jimmy got off WAY to easy!

You knocked it out of the park with this one.

I am just now getting around to reading it. I usually read yours as soon as they are published. Just another in your great story telling manner.

Thanks. Keep them coming

JH4Fun

I liked this one, but am confused about how it started with the priest. Where does that fall in the story line after he buried Ken?

Why didn’t he sick the cops on Jimmy fir cocaine possession? Jimmy was usually carrying lots of cocaine.

Always sad when a dude catches oneitis for a gutter slut.

At least the ride ended before it was too late for him to get a chance at a happy ending.

pretty good one.

This was a really good one ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved the story, gave it a 5. But unless the husband was a reincarnated version of Gandhi, no way he takes the drugged up slut back. First, she cheated on him not once, but twice. Second, she helps set him up with drug possession charge, which earns him 18 months in prison. Maybe he discovers his daughter, the way the story happened. But you do not live with a woman, who set you up to go to prison, so she could have some “ strange”. Back in the day, I used some cocaine, at parties. I never turned into a drug fiend. Here is the thing about addiction, and why so many people relapse. You can go to rehab, and free yourself from the drug physically. But the mental part, is hard to beat. What it comes down to, is most people abuse drugs and alcohol, to help them deal with reality. Living in a group home, working at a shitty minimum wage job, is not going to help them break the cycle. And that’s, the truth.

So he gets arrested because it was in chia car. A good lawyer gets reasonable doubt in there. The minute he admitted to outting it on his car he would be going jail time. The reason is the coke head he is riding with had access to the car and no prints of his on the baggie. As fair as taking her back 2x never ever in this world

Bobby is the biggest wimp, simp & loser that he deserves every pain he got

The story definitely has holes however it is a 5 star story every day, well done, I loved it.

Hey Hooked, very enjoyable read! Always look forward to seeing a new story with your name on it! Thanks!

Killian

A very good story, gave me a few smiles and a few tears but an enjoyable read.

If he really love ken from the first time he saw her using drugs he should contact her parents if or his parents assuming they still neighbour ken won't be an addict and luckily she won't die.

Very touching story, thank you. KS

And Father Ron lived happily ever after! [grin]

What's not to like in this 5-star story? A classic somebody done somebody wrong over and over story. A nice finish to the deep hurt and sadness of the story was Kennedy finally getting clean AND the discovery of the lost daughter.

Outstanding! Missed this when you first posted.

I never viewed Bobby as a weak character, as some make him out to be.

A very well-assembled storyline with an interesting, kind chap with a moral compass, in a tough business. Loved it.

Very enjoyable read, but the first part, from the graveyard to the bottle to the priest, is never tied in with the remainder. Seems like either something was mistakenly omitted or something (the intro) was mistakenly not omitted.

Didn't rate.

Couldn't get past his crying and drinking. Way too wimpy for me.

USMC

1* this is so fucked up. how could Kennedy be 7 months pregnant with his baby if he had been in prison for 18 months? & he just, conveniently, sent his DNA to ancestry?

Good story - Second read.

What?! No Traci??

Would be an interesting scene, introducing Donna and Chelsea to his parents.

Good story, thank you. 5 stars.

It would be interesting to see the reaction of Kennedy's parents.

really enjoyed this one.

Very much enjoyed this well written story. Thanks

Might could round it up to 7. 🤔🙄😉

Second time around on this one. Excellent writing but a very sad story, I had more smiles than tears. Especially when the adopted daughter came on the scene. I had an adopted daughter and a biological one. They bot abandoned me when their mother divorced me. There mother was.....................! Fill in the blank, I did find a good woman with for young kids which I dearly love. That lasted almost 40 years before she passed. Amazing how they treat me like their real father and my own seem to hate me. Well what can you expect they have been uber the influence of their mother for the last 40 years. Like I said a good story but very sad, except for the ending.

Really good story. I am really surprised how different this author can write, from total nonsense to stuff like this, good and complicated plot, solid characters, without psychobabble and sermons. One of the best stories I have read in LW, albeit with a little taste of lemonade. 4 and a half stars.

Love the way you develop characters.

What a sweet piece of romance...! Man this story went down like a very fine drink. Left me feeling very chipper and pleased that I had found this jewel of a romance tale. 5 stars...!

Overall I really enjoyed it, but I'm confused as to where the first part connects to the rest. I assume it's after Kennedy's burial, but the priest is never mentioned again so what happened there?

I know this was supposed to be the story of a stand-up guy but, really, he was a capital-L Loser. And the crying in these stories?? There's nothing wrong with a guy having emotions but these guys just feel so sorry for themselves that they come across as quite pathetic.

Nice plot good characters just leave it out he could being her to 5 orgasms with his fingers and mouth every time, just too many.