All Comments on 'The Mystery Blonde'

This piece is nice -- as far as it goes. But it doesn't go very far.

No offense; but, like many offerings here, it is more a vignette than a story. The vignette is over before a reader could be much aroused. It is more like a fragment of a story.

Storytelling involves character and plot development. It involves the building of dramatic tension. There should be something at stake for someone. (Unlike sex in real life, sex is all too easy in many works of erotica.) Typically, there is conflict (human versus human, human versus nature/environment, and/or human versus self).

Keep on writing, but make your works more ambitious.

Eight inch dick ...stunning blonde comes out of no where and fucks him... happens all the time.... un believable

It served it's purpose.....to get you off quick...

This was a great story. Maybe it wasn't the most realistic but honestly it wouldn't have been as good if it was. The author is writing a short erotic story for his and everyone's enjoyment. I for one like a good fantasy. Trying to make this story more believable or longer would most likely have ruined it. It was short and to the point. But, damn, it was good.

If not of this, more stories like this.

Perhaps he gets in the habit of fucking pretty girls in public.