All Comments on 'The Mystery Box Pt. 03'

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Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

Love the story progression

Again the dialogue between the couple seems overly formal and after having read your other story it made me wonder if the dialogue is accidentally formal based on your writing style or not?

Looking forward to reading more

Tess (UK)

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Really old and disgraceful male Dominant, (unrepentent), enjoys most aspects of sexual/perverted interaction between the sexes. Enjoys reading erotica and occasionally creating literature mainly for my own pleasure but also to, (hopefully), provide pleasure for others.

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