by Ikay
Nice tale of a man who realized his wife didn't desire anyone but him. But first she scared him before he knew it was just the two of them. Forever.
I liked this story.
Tazz, I don't know why your comments keep getting deleted or lost. Sorry.
DWornock, You obviously don't like any story on this site. Why do you even read them? Every comment I have seen from you on here has been the same as the ones before. I thought you had actually left. I wish you would.
You're such a stupid shit.
I am one of those "old hides" of which you always speak.
Guess what? I am a 63 year old woman who has had the best sex of her life since turning 55!
You should live so fucking long, asshole!
Liked it a lot.
That Tazz guy is a creepy fucker. All those letters just piss people off. I don't have a problem expressing myself with real words and it is tiresome to see the comments with all those letters which are suposed to mean something.
Tazz your comments get deleted because half the time they make NO sense and as for the all the letters, why the need for those? I read your explanation on your bio there is FUCK ALL need for them with your cryptic comments. Are your comments so damn important that you feel the need to keep a count of them?
The story really worked, nice to see a loyal wife jerking the husbands chain.
He reads cuck porn on the internet and loves it. Gets hard hearing his wife describe fucking another man. That belongs in fetish. Not here were real loving wives are sacred and unread by normal decent people.
Ten comments (now eleven) and six from anons. Pretty good story, I love how the wife yanked his chain to make him realize she was the only one he needed to lust over. Still, hopefully she will think about the "why".
Nice, if rather quick build-up to the twist at the end. Keep it up.
for the husband. she is away all the time (and gets fucked ? ) and she is so illminded that she is not changing anything about it (eventhough without him she would be a bad payed teacher hating her job) and even grudged about his little fun alone at home.
Just because he's a complete cunt and the author is a mongloid doesn't mean it's fetish. If we got into the realm of Dom-sub where she is forcing him to eat cream or humiliating then this would be fetish. Just because it does belong in LW doesn't earn this turd more than 1 star.
might even be mental illness
didnt like the way this was developed or written, sorry this isnt a marriage, its a story of a man keeping a nest for a wandering spouse. She has no love or real interest in him as was evident in her smart azz answers as to why she married him. Just because she married an idiot doesnt mean she isnt cheating and in her description was nothing about her liking the sexual act with her implied small husband.
It's amazing how many men want to see their wives fucking other men......Lit has never been so full of cuck Stories before now......WOW. no wonder their are a lot of readers disliking StangStar06 and the likes... again WOW....
But then again, it was intended to be. She was trying to make a phule out of Hubby, in an educational and subtle way. It failed in the sense that the narrator's description of her made it seem unrealistic that she would be hit on so hard,. Her reportedly thoughtless reactions to his advances also rang false, so the entire seduction was weird. Cute, perhaps, but I saw little or no point...it was certainly NOT erotic (at least to me!)
A well-written tale, well told! Your story was nicely done, with good grammar, correct spelling and careful editing. That, unfortunately, is an uncommon trait among writers now. I particularly liked your character development and the clever plot twist. Fine job, keep up the good work!
More wanted from Helen ...err...what was her last name again ?? Let's get our hero into one fantasy after the other.
How about a swap story next? Then perhaps an interracial, followed by a lesbian scene, and then a celebrity !!
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GEEZ YOU REALLY DONT HAVE A CLUE AS TO WHAT IS SENSUAL OR EROTIC. THIS CLAPTRAP OF A STORY WAS KINDA CREEPY AND DEMEANING TO MAN. WIFE WAS TO DIPSHIT SELF INDULGENT TURD. LIKE IT, NOT MUCH.
It would have been so much better bad she actuall met and fucked another man. Besides, she can't deny how turned on her husband was. The only reason he even got jealous at all was from her prodding. I bet he would love to experience warching be take a big hard cock other than his.
That's a perfect portrait of a very wise wife teaching her husband a lesson. Maybe he learns and leaves it alone or maybe he takes the bait. It doesn't matter because in either case she gets her way, just as a good wife always should. ;)
"Our worst fears are also our greatest turn ons." (So true!)
The way you portrayed the wife, she's got everything i LOVE to see & touch & kiss on a woman! My dream come true! Her brains are just the icing on the otherwise delicious cake!
Damn good story, fantasy is one thing, but be careful what you wish for, reality is waaay more problematic.