All Comments on 'The Mystery of the Wrong Door'

Couldnt really make out who was doing what ...

Rubbish story

I don't often read stories here by Indians, so it was nice to read this story. I am from Maharashtra, but know a good friend from Bengal, and I am tempted to send the link to him to read. (But probably won't - he doesn't know that I read porn. I wouldn't be surprised if he does too, but he hasn't confided in me either).

Your writing quality is wonderful. I don't remember noticing any grammatical mistakes. More importantly, you have a nice knack for telling a story in an interesting way. It was arousing to think of Kirti being horny, and letting Jabon kiss her breasts. I was a bit disappointed in the ending, however. I thought the story would end with Kirti meeting the two voyeur boys, encouraging them to seduce her and to fuck her together, taking something of a revenge on the rude Jabon and also fulfilling her fantasy of having sex with two partners together.