All Comments on 'The Naked Mile'

Hi, here from the ND contest and from spending some time in town and on campus long ago. I remember girls in bikinis on the Drill Field but no fun like this! Great setup and very nice images and action. The credit card swipe analogy was particularly humorous! Excellent work, 5*

Fantastic story. Many many moons ago (back in the 80s) I went to school at Purdue University and they had a naked run in the middle of the night in the courtyard of the dorm complex I lived in. Biggest difference was it happened in the middle of winter.

Simultaneously HOT and ADORABLE!

Being a veteran as an entering freshman?

I passed on Greek Life...:+)))

Too immature...

Oooopsy!

That was funny as shit and so fucking hot. Great work!

I love the dynamic between Gabriella and the narrator, and you capture the vibe of college life beautifully. The sex scenes were hot and the "hostage" situation provided just a a slight BDSM twist to an otherwise vanilla story. A little proofreading would have helped, but otherwise, very enjoyable story!

What a fun, and funny read. Enjoyed it Five stars worth.

Great story. Would love to see a sequel about his fraternity adventures with Amber.

Enjoyable read

Cub reporter gets a scoop and a little more. I"m willing to bet the next assignment wasn't as good.

Good luck in the contest.

Nice romp with an enjoyable background story. Would love to see wherd this went as looks as though you've left an opening to carry on the story with Gabriella and / or Amber. Good luck

Great story. Really well done 5 stars!

Thanks for the well written, fun Story!

Bingo! The Naked Mike is a Naked Five! Well dressed!

Meh. Three stars.