All Comments on 'The Nanobots Pt. 02'

A mom and sister with big tits and he has the power to control them to his liking? What's not to love?? Was wondering if he was going to get his sister to also swallow the nanobots? Right now he's just controlling her using his pheromones. Five stars and a favorite point!

I really like when there is unintentional suggestions. Great story.

Excellent story.

I really hope there's so much more to come.

So sis doesn't notice mom not missing from elsewhere in the house and doesn't think anything is suspect with her big cock having brother suddenly having a tug in the livingroom. Granted this is a fantasy story as nanobots etc don't exist but the implausibility is getting deep. LIke next Tyler will tell them to give his cock the 5' x 20" treatment and sister will get fucked as it comes out mom's mouth after being fucked into her ass. See if you can keep it on the tracks, okay. I too enjoy and write for the build up and dug the surprise I'm home zip up your dong play. Sometimes the unnecessary wordiness even overpowers my willingness to trudge through paragraphs without something germane or progressing the story and it gets speed read. Doesn't mean I want to read how sis becomes overwhelmed with a sudden desire to swap cum with mom but there is a balance necessary and maybe ultimately they do but I hope you get my inference. Maybe a something about Mary scene "is that, is that hair gel"

Great work keep going!!

How thin is Mom going to be if she keeps losing fat all the time ,lets keep her in the Milf department . Also love that she is still fertile love for some bareback sex!

Yeah leave sister alone from the bots and keep her side of the story otherwise its just going to end up they do everything he likes ! They should keep their own personalities.

Cant wait what you come up with the next one.

I gave you five stars for the story but next time I will deduct a star if you don't get an editor. There were so many mistakes it made me have to reread certain sentences to figure out what you were trying to say.

This is a fantastically written story. The premise, the pacing, the actual writing craft on display. Super hot and enjoyable.

Perfect, great.

Damn, this story is so hot! Really looking forward to the next chapter!

Hope the condom too small. Breaks when he cums inside his mother, and knocks her up.

Looking forward to the next part.

Are you going to involve his sister

Keep it up dude. Loved your initial comments on your style of writing and it's bang on.

I'm really enjoying this series!! Keep up the good work!

Excellent story development! Please keep it up!

You're doing great so far.

Absolutely loved it 😍

Great story really like that and written so well, well done :D

Really looking forward to the next chapter. 😛

Definitely keep writing

I Love it! Continue please!! It's such a vivid Story, there is so much of good things, the nanobots, the women, how they act with eachother, naughty Sex, the taboo und Much more. So this could be far from the End.

Keep this going please

He's got to give the nanobots to his sister next... turn them both into his sluts.

still waiting for the next part dude bring it soon !!!!

Waiting for the next part, it's been a while since you wrote last one. I hope you continue this!

Part 3?

Pt 3?

Great story but please continue.

Can't wait for more!!!

Great series. Nice pace, excellent build-up. Overall a fun read. Hope Chapter 3 cums [SIC] soon.

Very well written. Please continue the story.

Looking forward to the next chapter

There isn’t going to be a third one lol

Are there going to be more chapters?

I can not wait for the next story

where did you go?

Hope you find the desire and time to bring in the next chapter

I swear I'm almost done with chapter 3. Life has just gotten so busy it's hard to write and this story just keeps getting longer and longer. I thought I was almost done but then the story went a direction I wasn't expecting and now I'm following it. It's already almost twice as long as the ch 2

Really hoping the next chapter comes soon... fun storyline!

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