All Comments on 'The Nanobots Pt. 03'

Finally the full penatration

Loved it, five stars. The story needs some editing. Page three you had mothers name where sisters name should have been. Other small problems, two times you typoed an I where an o should have been, sin for son. Someplace you doubled the word said. A few other errors but a great story, can't wait for part four.

Oh Yeah, more please. Hot sexy story.

Excellent story this far. Don't know which direction you are going and I would never presume to tell you what to write, but I don't know why I am looking forward to a point the technology run amok. Sorry Star Trek nerd here. Nanoprobes, Borg, Bad 😂

Excellent story please keep it going!

Great story. Please continue, but please don't make us wait several months.

Wonderful, keep it going. And just a thought. Nanobots could make great contraceptives.

Awesome story plz don't make us wait .... Loved every bit of it....

Somebody needs to get pregnant

You should set up a Patreon.

A good story that deserves to continue…

Great story.Just keep the story about a family having fun no need to have someone end up pregnant.To me a complete turn off.

Great story... please find time to keep it going

Awesome fucking series! Please don't stop! Five stars and a favorite point!

Next issue when. Loving this series

Great story needs more chapters

I hope th author is okay, been months since they last posted.

Cant wait for the next part

This really needs more. I hope the author is OK and will one day add a few more chapters.

I hope we can get some more of this, or maybe another story line from someone else who got the same nanobots.

Painfully slow. Less teasing, more story, and sex...

Is there any chance you’ll be adding to this story? I enjoyed it and would love to read more…

Oh please finish this story!!!!!!!!!!

Please!!!!!!!!!

Hoping you come back to this story. It's great!

Chapter 4 please, this story is really cool