All Comments on 'The Naughty Games Family Play'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

"In Chapter 2, "

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I hate, hate, HATE getting to the end of a story and only THEN finding out it's not a complete story. After years of this shit, I decided every time it happens the story gets a 1.

Mr Story TellerMr Story Telleralmost 2 years agoAuthor

Funny how those who complain that my story doesn't suit then always post as Anonymous!...Grow some balls and give some positive feedback and do it as yourself. Nobody is bothered about what you "Hate", but might be bothered about your thoughts on the story so far, #justsaying

Smash46Smash46about 1 year ago

I liked it was disappointed when it ended but looking forward to more.

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