All Comments on 'The Naughty List'

I loved the bit where she decided to "black male" Santa. I was hoping there would be a black male involved.

Get an Editor!

Or someone who can spell and Punctuate!

Editor missed lots of misspellings.

Lol, I guess Santa does really like his Hoe, Hoe, Hoes :p

Made me chuckle.

Cute!

Spellcheck is your friend!

You write very well, as always, but I admit that the general idea of the plot did not appeal to me.

Great story! Fun, whimsical, naughty but actually not degrading or bad.

I like it and hope to read more stories of her adventures with Santa.

The editing is my fault. I send the wrong file to Erin. There should be an updated file appearing soon.

I know I am prejudiced, but one of the things that I really enjoyed about Erin's story is her familiarity with the military. She has obviously spent a significant amount of time around Marines.

Thanks everyone for your feedback so far. The story will be updated in a day or so.

Fire your editor! Spelling error para 2 and 2 punctuation errors in para 4

I was hoping to edit my previous one. Not to be, I guess. But there are SO MANY errors to be absurd!

Really, Folks, grammar and punctuation? That's why you read these stories? I thought it was a cute story with a novel story line. Just wish the Grammar police would stay away until after I read the story and worthwhile comments!

That was an interesting little romp. The errors sometimes made it difficult to read. I wondered for a moment if you were trying to be humorous again with "Then maybe I could use the video to black male him." or not. I'm leaning towards you not knowing how to spell 'blackmail'.

I gave you 4/5 for the cuteness in your story though.

Loved it! Cute story.

WHAT A STUPID STORY