All Comments on 'The Naughty List: Prologue'

This looks exciting! Excellent writing too! Looking forward to future chapters.

Well, croa2615, this was one of the oddest stories I've ever read on Literotica. It's also one that I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Can't wait to see where this story is heading. Five stars plus for imagination. Thanks, MLF

Just wonder Grandma Mary is female version of Santa? Or some random magical creature?

Ken!?! This is fantastic! Imagine this? I’m imagining this! Will our protagonist work through the whole list? Gosh this is wildly imaginative and a Christmas twist? Five Stars and Following. Tell me more, please. I’m Dan and I want more

I adore your writing style, and can tell this will be good. I'm looking forward to the next chapters!

Great start!! Can't wait for the story..

I do wish he had not filled in all 9 lines.. I can dream of having that list, and having a few open lines to fill.

DV19