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LilacQueen15LilacQueen15over 3 years ago

Murder is beyond the pale! Especially for the reason given. She should go to prison!

danoctoberdanoctoberover 4 years ago
Murder she wrote.

Quite cute.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
SAD REALLY

When you think about it. Two of the three men were cheats. One of the three women was a cheater.

Half the main characters are immoral oathbreakers.

Though it makes for an entertaining fairytale,lol.

AMerryman

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Dear Bruce22

Something terrible did happen. You just missed it in this sorry little story that tried hard to be interesting and entertaining but failed to conjure up any real cleverness. RIP

Sid0604Sid0604over 9 years ago
Thank you...

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.

bruce22bruce22over 9 years ago
Pleasant little tale

I kept waiting for something horrible to happen and ,,,,,,

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An old printer, typesetter, proofreader, local politician and activist. I write for pleasure only, an untrained writer too set in his ways to change or learn. I have courted and been wedded to the same impossible angel for over four decades, so I am an unremitted romantic. If ...