by silky-bi-girl
More pussy-licking and less dildo play would be to my liking, but this is a teriffic story nonetheless. I just wish it wouldn't have ended so soon. (Ingrid went to college to become a stewardness?)
For a first effort this is a well done story showing more than mere promise. Were it not a "first effort" I would rate it the same. I read erotica for arousal and the pure joy of immersion in sexuality. All too many settings and characters are quite well known by now, (See Literotica, as well as Nifty among others)and it is difficult to avoid the trite or banal. So, it is with that in mind that I applaud this effort and hope that our new friend continues to write erotica of her choosing and feeling to and for the pleasure of us all. FYI I have already commented to her by PM.
imouse
Fabulously naughty and well written.
A vicarious dream come true.