All Comments on 'The Necklace Pt. 02'

Great story line! Cant wait to read the next part!

They are in their own place falling in love and realizing how much they need each other. Then her past awakens them.

Jim and Allie are almost kindred spirits and need to be one to complete each other.

Great story and the sex scenes are amazing.

5 stars for both parts so far.

Please continue.

I hope chapter three is soon. Thanks

I so can't wait for Chapter 3. This story is getting really good. You truly have a talent at writing your story. Please come out with chapter 3 soon. I really hope Allie's father sees what's been happening to his daughter and turns over a new leaf and gets pissed off from how Ken has hurt his only child. I also hope he supports her in her dream. I hope Ken and his family get in trouble with the law.

A really well written story so far looking forward to reading more

You have brought the two characters to life in a way that creeps up on you. Now we have to wait in suspense to see what happens next, brilliant writing and storyline! 5 stars all the way!!!

Fantastic story! I am so looking forward to chapter 3. Thank you for the good works.

Good cliffhanger. The next chapter should be very interesting. I can’t wait.

Beautiful buildup. Now to see it to the end. 5*s.

Jim should kill that rotten prick, then marry Allie and open the daycare and make her a mommy many times. She's his wife and they aren't married... yet!

great story so far. just wondered how the cabin has power, heat and water but no one has used it in 2 years?

Djeez, this could/should become a movie... 5stars again... onward to part 3, incoming!

"About a half hour later, the fire had mostly diminished. I put out the remaining coals before making the short trek to my room." They froze to death that night. THE END.

I'm enjoying the story, other than how you keep throwing out things like this that pull me out of it.

The excitement builds. Nothing wrong to date.

First, if your stuck in a cabin with 4 feet of snow and the temperature is in the teens and you shut the bedroom door, shutting of the heat to that bedroom, it's going to get cold real fast in that room! I lived in 82 below zero weather in Fairbanks Alaska, so yes I know this for a fact! Other than that point I like the story! 5 BIG ASS STARS!

getting better

loved it, next chapter please

WONDERFUL SERIES, 20 stars. Hopefully Jim's twins are in Allie's belly. That way, she'll be a wife and mother with a daycare business, with kids for her children to play with

Couldn't give this less than 5 stars, would give more if possible

Can love bred in isolation survive in the 'real world'? Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.