All Comments on 'The Nectar Job'

Great story but didn’t understand the ending.

Thank you for reading my first ever submission to Literotica! I love feedback, so if you have any thoughts on this piece, please comment.

This was a lovely story and although it almost turned into erotic horror with Marvin in the pool of bile you effectively pulled me into the story. I was almost thought the plant wanted Marvin's seed to impregnate herself and never would have thought the twist at the end of where the "nectar" really came from (no pun intended). Keep up the great work and I look forward to any new stories you may have!

[15.11.22]

Great story!

11/10!!!!!

An entertaining story! My only issue is what appears to be some narrative dissonance with the ending.

At the beginning of the story, Marvin was thrilled to be a neophyte, emphasizing that he was a *man* at what was clearly implied to be a female institution. (Or predominantly so.)

But then at the end, both the chaperone *and* the two other students were all male?