All Comments on 'The Needs'

Decide first if ifs vijay or vivek. Did u read it back after writing?

Hey considering your previous shitty work,this was good one actually too good.you were imaginative writer it is now,that you understand the nuance of erotica.

Thank both of you for your valuable comments.. I will definitely try to improve my next writing

Very well written plot. Some more sex would be a bonus but overall great. Waiting for part 2

'Licked her penis..' now dear, what do you mean by that? That means you haven't edited your story before submission..

You are in dire need of a good editor but the story line was good. I am a big non con fan and would have like more back and forth (non con sex) with Vijay before they both got a conscience.

Keep writing, find an editor

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Excellent story, really good about the human emotions part. Looking forward to reading more stories from you.

Way ahead than good type story, nice ending also. A idle example for all couples touching both poor and rich society... great efforts