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Click hereStone shrugged. The chopper swung low under the wind. In the distance, the dark smudge of the coastline began to appear on the horizon. The ship was already gone behind them, swallowed by the rain.
Then his mythos would only grow.
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ANNOUNCEMENTS:
Hey!
This is just a sexy little one-off I wrote a while back (which could eventually turn into an interesting character and storyline, who knows!). After having published the end of Bimbo Builder Academy (arc one) last week, I wanted to give you something a little less involved to read while I gear up for my next big project.
Even with short sketches like this, I really do hope you enjoyed the story. If you did, then please rate and comment. It means the world to me and even if I don't respond to all my comments, please know that I read every one. When I feel like my work doesn't matter, I come back and am reminded that wonderful people out there really are reading what I publish.
You can find me elsewhere online if you want to get early access to future stories (multiple weeks ahead of Literotica). If you're going to be spending a lot of time alone this coming month (what with the virus and all) I hope that reading my work gives you a little entertainment during long, boring stretches of time.
Lots of love, and I'll see you soon for my next publication!!!
JC
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoGreat character, with the complexity we're used to seeing from your characters. The protagonist is darker than the ones in Bimbo Builder Academy and TRANCE, and it's a nice contrast. He cares about those closest to him but nonetheless he's a bit corrupted by the power.
JCBelerenabout 4 years agoAuthorI appreciate the comment (as well as the critique), though I do disagree.
I think that being motivated by boredom is a cop out, and being motivated by sex is just not that interesting. Especially when someone with this ability would be able to sleep with whoever he wants. I'm not sure what you meant by "professional pride", but I went with "loved one held hostage" because it's not hard to fathom that someone with influence and power could use a family member as a bargaining chip against someone with pseudo-magical abilities. It happens frequently enough in superhero movies.
Anyhow, I'm always grateful for the feedback and hopefully my reasoning makes sense. (Even if you don't agree with it. :) )
Kenourioabout 4 years agoThis would definitely make for a good series. Hot as hell but also a very nicely drawn shadow world. Only thing was, I didn't like the idea that the gangster he worked for was holding someone he loved hostage - why couldn't he just have used his Power to get her out? Better to have him motivated by boredom, professional pride or sex.
So good to see a MMF mind control fantasy, which seems quite rare here.
