All Comments on 'The Neighbor Lady'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Have a look

I enjoyed your story very much with that straight forward MILF that likes to show off. But I think you should slow down your narration when it gets hot. Give some more decription please there would be so much to see and notice. What about emotions? Despite from his admiration he seems so cool and unimpressed by her. Being his first woman I guess he would ask her bunch of question why she's so different than all the other women he knows. Also he might fell in love with her and he would be urging to kiss her.

Keep up your good ideas as well as your good work and don't let us wait too long for next submissions.

guan818guan818about 15 years ago
It is hot!

Can't wait to read more about the hot lady.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
very good

bring us some stuff soon , very good beginning ; the guy should give her a facial each time !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Very good

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great story

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You a female and into that

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