All Comments on 'The Neighborhood Ch. 01'

Great start to the story. No messing about straight into a bit of sex

I guess when Chris finds out his mother did see him peeking, things are going to develope for all. One happy family. Thanks.

Somehow more believeable than most stories here - a good job of two viewpoints, though Chris's seems a little more real than Emily's, so I guess you're a guy. I hope you'll keep writing - you seem a natural!

I like that you're telling it from all perspectives. You're writing style is nice. The imagination you're putting into your characters and their thoughts & feelings is excellent. My only disappointment is that this is the only thing you've posted so I have to wait to read more. :)

Pick a perspective and stay with it.

loved that story very got and horney.