by vanpeebles
what started out as a potentially hot series has evolved into the same-old-same-old...
your original scenerios have lost being hot.. the dialogue is anything but a turn on..your "entire" family interplay..including male bi totally dropped..etc..etc..it would benefit you and your series..to go back and re-evaluate what you originally proposed. what you originally presented...and return to it..
Just love this Story. Keep up the good work, Thanks.
Still a great story! Nice to include the whe family! Maybe Jennifer and the step mom cam work out their differences! Maybe include some more male bi, since you already went their! Keep it coming!