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by Paladin1188

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This is great! The story pacing is moving along nicely. You need to have a friend or another writer do a proofread of a few misspellings but otherwise it’s good. I look forward to the next chapter.

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I have written a variety of material but would welcome collaborations. I do read my comments if you wish to leave them. As Paul McCartney said, " I wanna be a paperback writer'

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