All Comments on 'The Nephew Sleeps Over'

You really need an editor.

5 stars. This story is so hot.

I used to have an older aunty that was unmarried. This story brought back so many horny fantasies I had about her.

If you are offering to edit stories, send a message. If not, stfu and enjoy your wank without the feedback.

Simply 5 stars. This story was so frickin' hot.

I love the way you build the plot before you execute it. 5 *

Should have make it he catches her naked or masturbating; As is, borders on Rape;

*REALLY* messed up that she's molested a child, & he (an insecure virgin boy) hasn't even seen her naked. 3* Needs work

Thanks for the feedback. But not sure if you read the story to the end. He has more than seen her naked.

I think it went straight to sex with insufficient build up. He did nothing at all to seduce her and she is simply taking advantage of a naive young guy. But why? This is a major taboo yet she leaps into bed with him with no internal conflict or sexual tension.

I don't know man. Maybe you have valid points but I have wanked 5 times over it and it always gets me finished.

Drop me an email with some feedback on some other stories too. Appreciate you taking time to read and critique it.

Content and premise were good but the constant switch from 1st person, I, to 3rd person, she, made it difficult to enjoy.

I apologise that the swirch from I to she for a moment interrupted your attempts to nut in no nut november.

It was good.....AL

Very hot story. Enjoyed it a lot. Thanks!

Thanks Kinky Queen Bee. Here is to you hopefully letting me watch you enjoy the story next time.