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Click here"Now, if you drop the quarter," Alejandra continued, "then we'll do this again tomorrow night. And if you drop it again, we'll do it again the day after. We'll keep adding days until you can go at least 4 hours without dropping it. I want you to be in mortal terror of dropping that thing, understand?"
Leigh's face paled, and even though she was pressing it harder than ever to the wall, Alejandra noticed, and grinned.
"Oooookay. Of course, you'll never know when we might be... enjoying the entertainment you've provided. So have fun with that! You can pass the time by thinking about who might be watching you suffer. At any given moment, it could be anyone, or no one at all! How exciting!"
She really was running very late at this point to the party she herself had organized. Not a good look. She did one last check to make sure everything was in place, gave Leigh a quick peck on the top of the head, and then ran for the door.
With one foot out into the hallway of their apartment complex, Alejandra turned back and shouted one last thing over her shoulder.
"Oh, by the way, Leigh," Alejandra said, "Ben texted me saying that he texted you lifting the no-look order this morning, but he thinks you didn't get it- something about the SMS on your phone acting wonky lately? So it turns out that you shouldn't have been punished at all. But you and I didn't know that at the time, so... I guess I still have to punish you. You know the rules! Once a punishment is given, it can't be taken back. Sorry, baby! Enjoy your evening- I know I will!"
And off she went, locking the door behind her.
As she waited for her Lyft on the curb, Alejandra pulled out her phone. There was her roommate- naked, covered in sweat, already shaking a little, it was hard to tell whether from effort or from sobs- looking incredibly sexy and hot. She didn't know it, but she was going to be the main entertainment at her own birthday party.
-END OF PART ONE-
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoI thought this was a great story, loved the idea of Leigh being watched as a punishment. I am really hoping for a part 2. I hope you keep writing, you’ll get better as you go, so you shouldn’t give up over a few people who don’t agree with your kinks. It was sexy and I would love to be in Leigh's place one day. I thought there was the right amount of control for that dynamic and I am really interested to see where part 2 will take things in the relationship.
Thanks for the excitement, Mothgirl11212018
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoGreat story, great dynamic between two friends who clearly understand what each-other wants.
Regarding the comment about breach of trust, I don't agree. As a masochist and submissive myself to be told that after a spanking and during corner time would just make me fall deeper into subspace and really horny. I thought those last paragraphs were great. Cruel/Bratty behaviour, exactly what you'd expect from a friend who's enjoying indulging in your fantasy.
Great story and we'll written. Thank you and I hope there is more to come?
OspreyXVIIIalmost 4 years agoAuthorOf course, taste is subjective, my kinks are not everyone's kinks, and this story is not very well written anyway, so I don't blame you at all for disliking it. I'm not terribly fond of it myself.
But consider this: the punishment might be rendered "unwarranted" by the final twist, but was it really ever warranted to begin with? The rule she broke was absurd. The idea of an adult human being giving another adult human being rules to follow, in earnest, is absurd. No punishments in BDSM are ever really "warranted"-- we just agree to pretend they are for the sake of a good time.
To me, the absurdity of the punishment (and the character's continued participation in it, despite the complete lack of physical coercion that she do so) makes it clear that this is ultimately all just a game. To suggest that a punishment is "earned"-- that is, that some adults have the right to mete out arbitrary rules and consequences to other adults, outside of the legal system-- is far more "extreme" than anything I write.
Just something to consider...
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoI agree with Anon entirely, it’s an absolute breach of trust. The filming and insistence to continue the unwarranted punishment is fucked up beyond belief. Once something is on the internet it’s there forever.
For me it falls into the extreme so I won’t be continuing to read more.
Tess (UK)
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoThat last few paragraphs.. that's broken trust right there. She has every right to turn off the camera, put on her clothes, and burn that book.
