All Comments on 'The Neural Inhibitor'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice story

hope that I will read more of Kyle will increase his slave ring

flynndriderflynndriderabout 4 years ago

Amazing story.

You're using your and you're wrong

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
nice twist

and a good storyline. Not sure about the title - doesn't make a lot of sense, but the story works. Thanks

TSreaderTSreaderabout 4 years ago
A very good start!

Very good indeed! I hope that you'll continue this story! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
What to do next

They should all learn to eat pussy. Then he should have them bring in friends and family members for temporary fun. Kyle can use the others intermittently and then let them go with just a memory that they aren't sure is real or not. But the first four remain permanent, always enthralled to him.

Jedd

zena99zena99about 4 years ago
I liked it

This was a very enjoyable tale. I hope that it continues. I think there are plenty of opportunities for Kyle to expand his group.

C_frommnC_frommnabout 4 years ago
Very Good Start

Can't wait to see what he come's up with next. Maybe impregnating Jessica to keep her tied to him in her mind. then Watching as the other's have Pleasure with him. and not get pregnant.

RedPandaSevenRedPandaSevenabout 4 years ago

Great setup look forward to seeing where this goes

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Hype

Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More please!

This was good, we definitely need a second part to this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Hope you have a pln to continue this story. Otherwise we'll miss the development of a great plot.

Anonymous
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