All Comments on 'The New Arrangement'

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bobbphil08bobbphil08over 4 years ago

Great story! Will there be a Ch. 2?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Do NOT write conversastions as one paragraph.

When the character speaking changes, start a new paragraph.

ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 4 years ago
Better than that

Why do I feel like it's going to be sticky and dirty? I hate this kind of domination. It's like the women forget how to be kind and loving and turn into total bitches who don't care. I absolutely hate this kind of nasty crap. The women forget how to live for themselves and get some sleazy guy to make their decisions for them. Most women are better than this. You can be dominant without having some guy tell you how to control your submissive other.

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