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TxScribeTxScribeabout 4 years ago

Very good, and hopefully just a start ??

dwr0242dwr0242about 4 years ago

I see hope there's more to this story! Very hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More, please !

Great. Loving it.

SoleBrotherJeffSoleBrotherJeffabout 4 years ago
You are a great story teller !!

Take your time writing. What ever you write, Your fans will love it !!

Thank you so much for being here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great build-up

Can't wait to see where this goes!

ManosHandsManosHandsabout 4 years ago
Well done!

I just love the way you write. Flawless and easy to read, with such good pacing.

Sequel or not, it's a 5 start story, and then some!

Thanks,

T

carrteuncarrteunabout 4 years ago

Like the concept but the writing was stilted and awkward.

mammoetmammoetabout 4 years ago
Loved it

i hope chapter 2 will follow soon.

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