All Comments on 'The New Candy Store'

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Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

Group sex? Kind of hoped the storyline would have been just Kelly and Eric.

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

Just more group sex.

WilliedemonWilliedemon10 months ago

Lost me on this. Personally not a fan of everyone fucking everyone else. Got very predictable, and frankly boring. Only 1 start for parts 2 and 3. At least part 1 had the siblings just between themselves.

seasteve123seasteve1233 months ago

Agree with the other comments. Adding birth parents? Would have been MUCH better to continue with Kelly and Eric. 1/5. Part 1 was great. 2 and 3? Not so much.

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