All Comments on 'The New Cuck Couple and Bull Ch. 03'

Forget that fact that it's a cuckold story and those don't play well. The issue is that the characters are SO thoroughly unlikable and their words and actions are so ridiculous that you have no chance that this will be an interesting or entertaining story. None. Zero. Zilch. That's the problem with this story and that's why it will get bad comments and a low score. I would suggest you read several of the higher rated stories on this site and in this category. A difficult category to be sure. And trying to emulate the top authors would be a mistake. But it might give you some ideas on how to write a decent story. CHEERS!

1 star

So your b.s. story is also.

Is this bull house broken? Too much bullshit ruins a floor and a story.

Some of the scenes would have more impact if you had them actually talking, rather than just writing that they spoke.

He needs to show more assertiveness and speech can show this and turn this from a cuck story into a bull story.

Writing that he told her to get on all fours is hohum.

"Get on your knees slut." Adds some impact that he is a bull.

A Canadian cuck story? Based on their leadership, I thought they were all cucks.

It's Canucks not cucks

A hand grenade would do the world a favour.