All Comments on 'The New Job'

by Slightlysolied

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ThomasLordThomasLordover 9 years ago
Good Start

This is a well written, good start to what good be a hot story but way to short to be a stand alone story. Add more to it or write a part 2. You're a good writer. Make it a good, hot, nasty story.

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 9 years ago
Wowwy wow

Nice job, great detail. Looking forward to the next part please hope it is soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
EXCELLENT

Look forward to part 2 hope she gets him in a 69

SlightlysoliedSlightlysoliedover 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

As this was the first story I have written I appreciate your feedback. Thanks again.

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