by Slightlysolied
This is a well written, good start to what good be a hot story but way to short to be a stand alone story. Add more to it or write a part 2. You're a good writer. Make it a good, hot, nasty story.
Nice job, great detail. Looking forward to the next part please hope it is soon.
As this was the first story I have written I appreciate your feedback. Thanks again.